vendredi 22 octobre 2010

11. Le parapluie violet dans la Rue Mouffetard


Dans la soirée, il marchait en plein milieu de la rue. Il a marché dans le soir en bas le millieu de la rue. Les autres liu ne voient pas. Pour le weekend ils allaient à la maison. C'est pleut et ils ont faim. Ils voudraient regarder le football en télévision et boiraient un verre du vin rouge.

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In the evening he walked down the middle of the street. The others did not see him. They are going home for the weekend. It is raining and they are hungry. They would like to watch the football on television, and they would like to drink a glass of red wine.

4 commentaires:

Virginia a dit…

Real men carry violette parapluies! HA I miss walking down rue Mouffetard!!
V

Francisca a dit…

Your photo... and Virginia's comment make me smile.

[I'd write the first sentence: Dans la soirée, il marchait en plein milieu de la rue. -- Julie, tell me when you want me to stop. I'm serious. :-)]

Julie a dit…

I would love you NOT to stop. This is why I am doing this blog in this way. To improve my knowledge of how the language works. Bit by bit. I have another blog where I practice writing English. A flash story each and every day. I am hoping that I will be able to write captions for a photo in French each day. I really appreciate your taking the time to suggest how you would write the caption. If you drop by once a week and have a suggestion, I am only too willing to listen.

Francisca a dit…

Julie, je dois te dire que ça me rend un peu nerveux, parce que je ne suis pas un locuteur natif moi-même. Mais peut-être nous pouvons apprendre ensemble! :-D